Comments on: Five poems

By: George Anderson

George Anderson — Sun, 26 Jul 2009 06:00:58 +0000

Jim, thanks for wasting my time.

A lot of thought has gone into this statement.

By: Girl In Czechland

Girl In Czechland — Sat, 25 Jul 2009 17:21:42 +0000

These made me laugh out loud. Good stuff.

By: Tammy

Tammy — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 01:27:12 +0000

Loved Second Draft — a lifetime indeed.

By: ken armstrong

ken armstrong — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 17:42:15 +0000

I just love these poems.

I just do.

By: Jim Murdoch

Jim Murdoch — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 14:53:34 +0000

Thanks for the feedback, Ani. I have a hard time injecting sex into poetry at the best of times let alone in any of these stripped-down affairs.

And, Koe, your other comment on my blog was much more sensible. Go and stand in the corner.

And, yes, before the both of you start, I know someone out there will get turned on by that. People are just plain weird.

By: koe

koe — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 19:25:12 +0000

Jim, Ani, I think the sex was between da DUM DUM, DUM DUM and DUM DUM da DUM. I think, if I am understanding that rhythm correctly, that is definitely where it is. Might be there or, I know that, ‘you should leave now’ can be a pretty effective line of seductioneering.

I too like these

By: Ani

Ani — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 22:19:39 +0000

Look, it’s Jim! Hi, Jim.

I like these, but where is all the sex?

(I kid, I kid.)